艾易艾斯(aeas) 写作范文欣赏 （七）议论文（7-12）

本期写作范文欣赏要跟各位家长和学生分享一下艾易艾斯(aeas)议论文写作技巧和范文。7-9以及10-12年级组都常考议论文。因此，我给大家综合分析一下议论文的谋篇布局、议论展开和论点总结收尾。清晰、直接了当的文章结构是议论文的一个重要评分点，因此，我们会在教学中指导学生如何审题、如何直截了当地写作主题句（topic sentence），如何从主题句展开议论，以及如何运用正面、反面说理来加强文章的说理性。

文章结构与布局

* 作者的议论观点：

* 支持观点的议论段1.

* 支持观点的议论段2

* 文章收尾

示范题目:

Would you rather have home cooked meals or eat out in restaurant?

文章结构

* 作者的议论观点：I would choose to eat in eating out is as time hassle as eating in

* 支持观点的议论段1： Eating out is not convenient as it seemed to be.

* 支持观点的议论段2： One does not have control over the way the food is prepared in restaurants.

* 文章收尾强调论点：eating in obviously beats dining out for saving of hassles and healthy food you can have.

范文欣赏

Given choice between eating out or eating in, I would choose to eat in. Although it may seem like a convenient choice, in reality you are

not saving time and you really have little control over what goes into the food.

While eating out can seem convenient, it’s often times as much hassle as eating in. First you have to get there by car, subway or foot. Then, you have to wait in line to get seated, put in an order and wait for the order to arrive. It can be difficult to make choices of where and what to eat. Eating out can be more difficult than eating in.

Many times, one does not have any control over the way the food is prepared when you eat out. In fact, you really don’t have any control as to how much salt or fat is put in the food. However, when you cook at home, you have complete control over the cooking process. You can choose ingredients that are good for your health and are with good flavours.

In a word, eating out is a popular activity in modern society for the assumed time-saving option for busy people. However, if you look it closely, you will find that eating in obviously beats dining out for saving of hassles and healthy food you can have.

教师点评：考场分数17－18分

* 这篇文章结构清晰，支持段落能有效支持作者观点，没有偏题问题。

* 文章的议论段，议论有力、 句子间逻辑清晰、连贯。先抑后扬的写作手法增添了文章的议论力度，是考生可以借鉴的写作方法。

* 总结段言简意赅，再次重申作者观点增添说服度。