艾易艾斯（aeas)10-12 年级写作真题解析

针对艾易艾斯（aeas)10-12年级组最近一期考试的写作考题，很多家长和学生在知晓题目后，纷纷表示难以下手，不知从何写来。现游洋根据自己的写作教学，为大家提供一个简约解析以及例文，以启发学生的思维。

艾易艾斯（aeas)10-12 年级写作真题解析

考题简述：write an article about the geography of your country

题目解析：

1. 审题：

* 学生需要读geography这个单词所包含的意思及范围有正确的理解才能确保所写的内容不偏题、符合相关性的评分点。

* 一geopgraphy这个词涵盖了一个国家的location（地理位置）、neighbour countries （邻国）, climate （气候）and landscape （地形）等主要方面。学生在写作时可以详细写其中两点，简约提述其他两点。

2. 写作词汇：

* 在游洋的写作课中，我们以“describe a place” 这个章节，详细教导学生在地点描写中的词汇和表达，例如：

o 位置动词：be located at/in; ….sit at; ….dot at; ….scatter; be isolated by…

o 方位表达：in the heart of; in the centre of; in the east；be surrounded by….

o 天气描绘词：Warm; humid; hot yet dry; tropical

o 享有／久负盛名：Enjoy; boast;

3. 多元化句型：我们在授课中，着重为学生介绍5种句型来增强文章的多样性。这些句型将在例文中给大家示范。

参考例文

What would it be like to live in China?

China is not only a country with the largest population in the world but also one of the largest countries in the world in terms of size. Located in the Southern east part of Asia, China covers around 9.6 million square kilometers of land. This makes it the third largest country in the world, with India being one of its most important neighbors.

As Beijing is the capital city, Shanghai and Guangzhou are flourishing cosmopolitans that are regarded the economic hubs of China. Like many other international metropolitans, most cities in China are densely populated and boast very convenient public transport. The hustle and bustle in the urban areas is sharply contrasted by the tranquility in rural areas, which highlights the diverse lifestyles in China.

From the cold freezing weather in the north to the tropical weather at its southern end, China covers a wide range of climates. Specifically, the middle part of China enjoys comfortable temperate climate and are characterized by very distinct four seasons. For example, cities along Huanghe and Changjiang rivers can witness the beauty of the nature coming along the shift of seasons each year.

Although the central part of China is mostly plain, the deserts in the northern west and coastal areas in the southern east showcase the diverse landscapes in my country. Rich and fertile, the vast land there produces abundant food and has raised generations of Chinese. All these features make China a very liveable country. （word counts 字数252）

点评：17-19 分

1. 下划线部分体现了多样的句式，例如 介词短语开头、从句开头、形容词叠加使用、从句应用等。

2. 粗体部分的描绘性形容词的使用恰到好处、同义词替换使用，使文章读起来生动有趣。

3. 连接词和表达的使用增加了文章的连贯性，使文章读来逻辑清晰可循。