手把手教你如何写书信G类和点睛

本文为大家详细比较雅思G类写作的小作文和大作文和A类雅思写作的区别,希望对正在备考雅思G类考试的学生们有所帮助,文章的最后还附上一篇雅思G类写作范文,相信大家在看完本篇文章之后都能对雅思G类写作有更加详细的了解。

大家普遍认为A类考试要比G类考试难,毕竟一个是学术类一个是移民类。但是在教学中发现,就小作文来说, A类反而比G类更容易写。雅思写作A类小作文包括了数据描述,地图题型以及流程图。 数据描述中又有不同的数据表现形式,比如柱状图,饼图,曲线图等。A类小作文之所以简单在于它并没有G类小作文当中所需要的purpose 和 tone, 也就是一篇文章的目的和基调。所以学术类小作文属于说明文,更是强调的描述事实,并不是去论证或者解释图形中所呈现的数据。同时A类小作文写作不需要任何写作基调,因为它是一个中性的描述,所以不像G类需要为文章目的和其所相对的基调而困扰。

相比之下,G类小作文的情况要复杂得多。大致的类别包括: 投诉信,道歉信,咨询信,计划改变信,感谢信,求职信,推荐信等。其实如果细看还能总结出更多的类别。总体来说,这类书信将考验到考生的想象及编写故事的能力。在有限的时间内,需要将自己作为事件的主人公来想想实际生活中碰到如何的情况,并按照合理的剧情做出适当的反应。往往对于考试中极度紧张的考生来说有一定难度。 再者,G类小作文的基调也要相对复杂,可以被很宏观的分为 formal, informal 和 semi-formal. 那么这种formality 的不同将会导致基调以及用词的不同。具体内容笔者将在以后的随想中予以解释和探讨。

1.抱怨信: complain about, deliver my complaint about…, extend my dissatisfaction over…

2.抱歉和解释信: apologize for, express heartfelt apologies for…, be sincerely sorry for…
首段:Dear Mr. Wang:
I am awfully sorry about what my dog did to your garden the day before yesterday, I want you know how badly I feel about it.I assure you that it will not happen again.
经过:因为狗链段了,家人不知道,跑去邻院,糟蹋了花草,我知道那是邻居爷爷精心培育的,感觉更对不起,对生起能理解,主动要求赔钱赔花,问还有什么别的要求)
结尾:Being sorry is not enough. But we honestly thank you for being so generous with us and our dog.
Yours sincerely
Lynn

3.感谢词:thank you from the bottom of my heart
thanks a million
I sincerely appreciate
Many thanks for your kindness
作业:Write a letter to thank your friends for caring for you when you were in hospital after an accident.

4.要求和申请信:apply for, ask for further information, ensure whether or not,
例:Write a letter to Mr. Wang who works in administration office to ask for an increase in financial aid.
Dear Mr. Wang:
I am writing to you to see whether or not I can get an increase in financial aid. As the administration office had done a lot in helping people with financial need.I tend to ask another help from you.

另附:小作文范文,G类的同学搞清正式和非正式书信的语言差异和格式
You want to see some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Explain why you are selling
Describe the furniture
Suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture
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Dear Jan,
As you know, we’ll be moving to a new house soon and there are a few things that won’t be able to take with me. The new house is a bit smaller so i have to seel some furniture and i was wondering if you might be interested.

In particular i want to sell my big dining table. Do you remember it–the one in the living room? It has wooden legs and a grey glass top and it’s big enough for six people. There are six matching chairs to go with it.

I know you’ve always liked this furniture so i could let you have it at a good price. I’d rather sell it to you than a stranger!

Why don’t you come around and take another look at them on Saturday? We’ll be here all day, so maybe we could have some lunch together?

Give me a ring and let me know,

Love,

Shanda
You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter
Explain your situation
Describe your problems
Tell him/her when you think you can start

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Dear Ms Barnes,
I am writing concerning the position of Assistant Office Manger that i am due to being next Monday. However, a problem has arisen.

As you know, i currently work for my uncle’s food-packing business, and you will remember from my interview that i have gained valuable experience there. Unfortunately, he has had to go into hospital for an operation, leaving my aunt in charge of both the home and the business. She has asked me, as this is a particularly busy time of year, to stay on and help her with the running of the office.

I realise this will be inconvenient to you, but very much hope that, given the circumstances, you would be prepared to allow me to take up my position with you two weeks later than planned.

I would like to emphasize that i remain very keen to work with you, and that i will be gaining further useful experience during this time.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,
John Forbes

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Dear Dave:
I am writing to let you know that at last we have moved to a bigger house! We just couldn’t go on living in the two bedroom bungalow now that the twins are growing up and the new baby has arrived. S o we started looking-and one thing led to another and finally here we are in our new home.

I’m sure you’ll like it. We have three bedrooms now and a very modern bathroom and kitchen. The kids are happy because there is much more space with the big living room and the garden outside. But Michel is the happiest of all because he doesn’t need to do much decorating.

Why don’t you come round this weekend and see what you think of our new place?we would all love to see you and if the weather is good we can have a barbecue in the garden.

Our new address and phone number are below, so give us a call and let us know when to expect you.

Lots of love,

Francis

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Dear James:
I was very shocked to get your letter saying that the noise from my flat has been spoiling your evenings and causing you some distress. I am really, really sorry about that. I had no idea that you would be able to hear so much , so i hope you will accept my apologies.

As you may have guessed, i am trying to refit my kitchen in the evenings when i get home from work. Unfortunately it is all taking longer than expected and i have been having problems with getting things to fit properly. This has meant a lot of banging and hammering.

As the kitchen is still not finished, i have decided to call in a professional builder who will finish the work in the next day or two. He’ll work only during daytime hours, so you won’t be disturbed in the evenings again, i promise.

Sorry to have caused these problems,

Bill

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Dear Jenny:
I hope this finds you and your family well, and I’m sorry i haven’t been in touch recently. I am writing now to let you know about my new job.

You remember that i was working for that construction company a few miles outside the city?Well, i just got so fed up with it–I was working really long hours and, to be honest, the pay wasn’t great. So basically i applied for a job at a new international company that was looking for admin staff for a new branch in the city centre.

I was a bit nervous in the interview, but in the end i got a job as one of the senior administrators. I am so happy!The pay is better, the working conditions are great and i don’t have to drive to work anymore.

Anyway, i have to stop now because my sister is staying with me and has brought my baby nephew to meet me. She sends you lots of love and is asking when we cal all meet up. Soon, i hope.

With love,
Tina